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a fool's verse
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a fool's verse |
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tek Junior Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 32Austin, USA |
a fool's verse silence is all she makes of all your dear mistakes. someone or whom may concern please show me how to learn. she wants me to be a guide i'll show the places that i hide. tell me who tore pages from the book that showed all the rules of love. surely he must know what to do with knowledge not meant for mortal fools. she sailed in to be my friend in awe, i slowly took her hand. someone from Heaven above must have known i needed her to love. observed all her Heavenly charms and slowly fell into her arms. in silence, no words are spoken the tie that binds is unbroken. so the fool saved from up above wrote a page into the book of love. so the sages will know what to do with knowledge meant for lovers attune. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Many might not understand a love that stands apart of the conventional. Your choice of words here, a little vague...but I think that was on purpose. Sometimes we find ourselves in unexpectedly wonderful situations.  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
interestingly written |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
nicely done tek |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Thank you for the read Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
nice read - thank you for sharing it with us RDB |
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