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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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so little time to spend they say one should be selective how their moments will be filled for the sake of one's health I gave up the cigarettes and I quit sipping the wine the fast cars too were stored somewhere to gather eyes but not my handprint occasions now the cigars heal my moments and three finger often's of jack dan along with the two wheel demons that offer no salvation and beg for no forgiveness only edges with second hand views as they flash before my eyes again ____________ daark |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, C'est la vive. Enjoyed the read. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS....I can picture the change...it looks pretty good!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You are in prime form this morning D, and looking pretty darn good in it, too. niiicee Dark buddie seek the flame within yourself |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I like. Im always giving up things for another that might be just as bad. I can relate to this poem Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
from the heart to the pen, stems all emotions...this was bittersweet, hopefully, the lessons learned from each other will be great rewards... marvelous images |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
thought provoking....anything like heresay? heresee?  kingsangel |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
your words melt me Mr Dark! a very nice read here... Be well Roniece |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
nope don't give up the handprint occasions Stranger darlin' I like this a lot... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pipamogios and amiga's, thanks to each of you for the blessing of your eyes and replies |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Selective jack dans and fingerprinted dark moments of reading... these make the memorable sighs... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
whitelady, thanks |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
handprint occasioned by second hand views, and mirrored glasses...hmmmmmm!  Only as daark does it...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl, thanks to you klassyone |
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