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| Open Poetry #39 |
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gris gris (charcoal man and his lady) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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gaunt morning light lady dresses in silence and rile takes herself to shakerag see yellow eye lwa woman head in brown rag make root work yellow eye woman shakes head points stick finger bone is still covered take this passes something lady tucks bag in private place wandering by bayou pissau lis growin’ yellow zirondelle floating over water delicate long legged ibis dipping for food at water’s edge ‘gator slippin’ up sudden feathers ibis gone lady thinkin’ we different ja’i gros couer I got heart pretty feathers charcoal man got gumbo like ‘gator gris gris I slipped to his tongue before caught my heart while his tiptoes from the house finds giggles red purple skirts fetchin’ faces lady sighs half moon fingers slide bag into water |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i just love these |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Helen... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You are hitting me hard here. I see myself in both Charcoal Man and his Lady -- maybe we all do. Maybe it's like the two masks -- they make me smile. They make me laugh. And, they make me bawl my eyes out. aziza |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Another wonder! Poor lady...what's in the bag? You've got my attention now, yano?! *hugs*....jo |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yano, Kate....I very, very rarely buy poetry because you can find so much for free. But have to tell you, honestly.....I would spend money on this series.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone..grigri won't sew up the hongry missyk..it just makes the joygirl join his sin skin, makes her savor the same saucery enjoyed you here ladyone |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Whatever she is thinking, it can't be good! Back to waiting for the next peek. Sandra |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
OK, I'm hooked and eagerly waitin in anticipation for the next in this fine series! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your twists are lovely turns. Awaiting more.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
aziza maybe you’re right maybe we all see both in ourselves two masks… thank you kate thank you for that jo  whatever’s in the bag is in the water now good luck ms. ‘gator Stranger I hope joygirl join his sin skin she wants him so badly… poor thing thank you Sandra poor lady is driven to distraction… thank you Gentle Spirit… more on the way Karilea… |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I believe, Kate, that you should publish these poems. I'd buy the book, treasure it and wear it out reading it. Please? I wonder if she got him, if she would want him. He wouldn't be the man she loves. A |
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