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My Little Hears of Sorrow
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My Little Hears of Sorrow |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
My Little Hears of Sorrow Loneliness invades the conscience and defiles the heart, turning its flesh to stone, and corrupting love. However, it is not the measure or the depth of your pain nor the staining memories to reconcile, instead it is the passing of time, which can ruin with unforgiving, or heal with forgetfulness… I know the sorrow in your hearts. And, I know too, that love can mend it for you. Let the past be broken off and gone forever. And, let the pleading for integrity fade. It isn’t you, or your precious hearts betrayed, but the supplier of corruption whose debt someday, in kind, will be repaid… |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
instead it is the passing of time, which can ruin with unforgiving, or heal with forgetfulness… I know the sorrow in your hearts. ~*~ Even read as singular, yes, I think you would know. Well done, Poet. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I don't know about fish because this poem didn't stink at all. Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, JL, love is the only thing that heals ... all things. Enjoyed the read! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Your poetry is all dressed up like a knight in shining armor...wonderful write for my first morning read....it's sooooo good to read you again.... Lee J. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh...the litany of an empathetic heart. Such gentle kindness in the wisdom you impart. The other side of sorrow is joy, JL. It is Joy! Loved this. TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
An eloquent reminder of how love conquers all. Good to be reading yours words again, JL! Warm, welcome-back hug, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well said JL...good to read you again!  ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
JL...Wise words my friend. Makes the reader think and re-read again to get the full grasp of your words and feelings...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks Sunshine. This is about three little ones whose story breaks my heart. Trutodaraiders…. OK??? Honeybunch thank you, and you are so correct. Lee J. Thank you sweetie. TD – Kathy, your words are true, the other side of sorrow is joy. But it’s climbing the heights to get to the other side which only time can predict the outcome. EA… Hi girl! I missed your “High-Spirits” too. Thanks Thanks Enchantress. Paul, my friend, thank you for your warm encouragement. I appreciate it.  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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