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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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she was the hollow ground drinking water faster than sun quick as sand can be she was waiting for the plows she wanted the scars there so her sacrifice would show and she could relive each time she became wet again from hearing the metal heartbeats from the ribs of the tin men with their hands over leaking holes plugging them from the sounds of her swallowing rain coming down _______________ daark scribblenote: fields of the dade after the fires [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-04-2006 09:05 AM).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
But when she blesses your eyes in her green skirt, will you write of her then? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
whitelady, I doubt it, everyone will be paying her tribute when she is lovely again. thanks for the eyes |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS ....I couldn't get those images of fire from out my head last night, so I wrote a fire poem...it didn't help. I'm glad to see you writing, that means you're ok...doesn't it?  |
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tek Junior Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 32Austin, USA |
excellent work here. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, yep am fine lil neighbor..thanks for the read babe. _____________ tek, thank you for the review |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' excellent words |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, thank you much hon |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful words here my friend  Be well Roniece |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
made me think of Wizard of Oz..very cool... kingsangel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I do love the way you speak of a good rain D....hugs hon. |
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stevepoet Junior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 46 |
very good writing.thanks. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms B, thanks lady ______________ ms jul, thank you for wizzin in _______________ ms gs, thanks for the eyes babe _______________ steve, thank you for the review |
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