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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-12-02 03:33 AM


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Helen dreams
Upon among
Those thousand ships
He strides in armor
Cast in gold

The hero
Who will narrow
The distance
Between fact and hope

Ah Dear Woman
If only
I could be that one


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-02 03:40 AM


John, your writing holds such beauty!

enjoyed very much

Be well
Roniece

Huan Yi
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2 posted 2006-12-02 03:46 AM


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Roniece,


Thank you.

Sacrilegious as it may be,
beauty in poetry
is all I aspire to.
A man could want worst things.


Thanks again.

John


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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3 posted 2007-04-24 04:23 PM


what a beautiful song of man( or every man)in spring.
sir, now it is winter. you have two more monthes for rehearsal.

sing again and again.

beautiful
enjoyed.

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