| Open Poetry #39 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan
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. Helen dreams Upon among Those thousand ships He strides in armor Cast in gold The hero Who will narrow The distance Between fact and hope Ah Dear Woman If only I could be that one . |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
John, your writing holds such beauty! enjoyed very much Be well Roniece |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Roniece, Thank you. Sacrilegious as it may be, beauty in poetry is all I aspire to. A man could want worst things. Thanks again. John . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
what a beautiful song of man( or every man)in spring. sir, now it is winter. you have two more monthes for rehearsal. sing again and again. beautiful enjoyed. |
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