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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. A small wooden bridge Over a frozen stream The leafless trees That surround the scene Are wholly covered with snow And what can you say To the boy and girl Who in their summer Once stood there Now each alone In a retirement home Far from who they were . |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my John, your write is filled with beauty, sadness and so much more... very much enjoyed Be well Roniece |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Roniece, Thank you. Atleast with one, I'm not all that bad in Australia. Thanks again. John |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Not bad at all John, just very very good!  Be well Roniece |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"Far from who they were" who they were? is stil who they were I believe. very beautiful. |
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