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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-12-03 02:19 AM


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Now mother
like father before
takes her place in a chair
by the two car garage

the world reduced
to a small backyard

aware without words
there’s nowhere to go

and whatever is next
will come of its own


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© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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1 posted 2006-12-03 02:23 AM


John, your words are so sad.. though beautifully penned

Be well
Roniece

Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2006-12-06 12:09 PM


Yes.  No place left to go, and no one to go there with.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-12-06 12:34 PM


always a pleasure to read you
Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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4 posted 2006-12-06 01:19 PM


very good read!!

kingsangel

Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-04-24 04:17 PM


and the small yard is all her big world which she gives her heart ot care.
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