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lil' Angel
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since 2003-11-14
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0 posted 2006-12-01 04:55 PM



We were meant to be together
Your hand fit perfectly in mine
Together forever was the way it should have been
But those dreams were quickly shattered
When you said you would rather talk to you mom than me
You said you loved me
But I guess your mom was more important than me
I guess that we will never be
I guess we were never really meant to be
But my heart tells me differently
It’s hard knowing feeling as though you’re the one
And knowing that we will never be

Lil' Angel


"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord."  Proverbs 21:30



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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2006-12-01 05:24 PM


Time reveals things we want to know...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2006-12-02 01:46 AM


love will win in the end.... be strong, if it's meant to be it will be....

Be well
Roniece

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-12-02 10:24 PM




ahhh Lil' Angel
this one really hurt
huh?

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02
Posts 820
CA
4 posted 2006-12-02 11:02 PM


Sometimes people try to force something that no longer is there. I agree with the comment above. There was a few grammer mistakes that need to be re-edited. I totally understand this poem, and thought it was ok. Thank you for sharing it.
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