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Open Poetry #39

Love

lil' Angel
Member

since 2003-11-14

Posts 116

0 posted 2006-12-01 12:56 PM

You said you loved me
Yet you couldn’t trust me
You said you loved me
Yet you let your mother get in the way
You said you loved me
Yet you choose your mom over me
You said we’d always be together
I guess you were wrong
You said I love you
I believed you
You said you’re too special
I’ll never let you go
I guess you were wrong
It’s over
Now what?

Lil' Angel

"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord." Proverbs 21:30

tek
Junior Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 32
Austin, USA

1 posted 2006-12-01 09:22 AM

I understand this and also think it is a good write. nice pleasant flow to it and captures the frustration the writer is feeling.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-12-01 09:44 AM

Sounds like he forgot the leaving the parents and cleaving to the wife part, huh?

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

lil' Angel
Member

since 2003-11-14

Posts 116

3 posted 2006-12-01 11:14 AM

Fortunately we were never married...We had talked about the possiblity, but thankfully i realized that he was tooo attached to his mom.

Lil' Angel

"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord." Proverbs 21:30

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

4 posted 2006-12-01 12:27 PM

Mommy's boys I have met my share...was actually asked to move in with a man and his mother...too wierd...ecspecially at his age....your better off trust me

kingsangel

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