Open Poetry #39 |
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Dedication to a Friend |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia ![]() |
* This is from the second book of poetry I've put together. I don't trhink I've ever posted it before...forgive me if you've seen it. Some people are born handsome a gift to all the world they show God’s grace upon their face their angel wings unfurled and some folks are born homely but love can make them shine they get the best from all the rest and everything is fine But you my friend are ugly you have a funny mug ears on your face, wide in their place best suited to a jug and eyes that are not matching that wander all around although they stare it is not clear just what it is they’ve found Yes you my friend are ugly except for when you smile except for where, you show you care and wow them with your style except for when you're laughing except for when you talk except for when you seethe or breathe except for when you walk I'll miss your smiles and laughter I'll miss the gracious way you shared the work and did not shirk I'll miss the things you say I'll miss the lunchtime talking the way you fixed my plug when life's a bore, one thing is sure I'll miss your funny mug. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But you my friend are ugly you have a funny mug ears on your face, wide in their place best suited to a jug and eyes that are not matching that wander all around ~*~ This reminds me of what someone once told my father...and we all had a wonderful laugh! ![]() |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I am most inspired by your writing Kethry... this is a lovely write of your friend... Be well Roniece |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderfully done! |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lynne, what a delightful read this is! such a warm memory to savor, to be thankful for! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
True beauty truly does come from within. With this compassionate and loving poem, your own beauty ~ and sense of humour! ~ is showing, Kethry! She sounds wonderful! ~ as do you! ![]() Loving Light, EA |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AwKethry~ Thank you so much for this piece ... I know we only met for a short while ... but, it's nice to remember that you remember my smile~ Just knowing that you care for me is a treasure beyond compare ... You see which eye is winking and you don't even stare~ I love you too, my funny friend our friendship is solid ... until the very end ... (and THEN, I'm coming back to haunt you !) ![]() *HUGLETS* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
is this Kethry from so long ago who departed for what seemed too long, and then I departed for perhaps much longer? Do you remember me at all? I have one on page two, Autumnal Mist that is an extremely recent one for me...like this week, in fact. VAS More later after I've taken in your poem here. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
cute and endearing, Kethry! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Some people are born handsome a gift to all the world they show God’s grace upon their face their angel wings unfurled and some folks are born homely but love can make them shine they get the best from all the rest and everything is fine Siyo Kethry I have met many who had sweet handsome faces and the heart of evil,beauty only lasts a short while,but goodness lasts forever!
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Kethry, Made me laugh and then...think about what really makes us tick. Thanks for sharing! |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Hahahaa....that's funny! Thanks for making my day. Was in a depressed mood just few moments ago.... you distracted me! nice read. FNg |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes you my friend are ugly except for when you smile except for where, you show you care and wow them with your style except for when you're laughing except for when you talk except for when you seethe or breathe except for when you walk Sounds like true beauty to me. *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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