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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Deep Down As I walked on thoroughfares of leaves Along uncharted paths where nature breathes Deep pine and autumn oak seemed wise and tall So many years they’ve had, to ring the essence of it all The sun shone brightly to give thanks I joined the sparkle of her ranks in chime Kneeling down to share these thanks of mine Remembering some hearts I carry near divine November found in hushed regard Made temperate in nature’s yard today In the company of spirits high, my mind at play Then pause, to tie my laces, drink the water, pray The real of core born longing for your smile Wishes to be sharing love in every mile high The center of a soul-to-soul connection filled my eye Welled the deepest recess of a heart felt sigh For you…I could not change reality ‘tis true But there deep down, to warm my life, you do Copyright Kkh 11/25/06 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This poem almost needs to be read in a reverent whisper. I enjoyed the walk through your autumn of remembrance. Kethry a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Revealing the deep down… is revealing. A masterpiece. You have graced the reader with the tenderness of your heart, and the wonderful workings of your mind. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lovely Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
the word perfect always comes to mind when I read your work TD those last two lines are amazing |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
am always astounded by your write, but this, Kathy, this is a master piece. Well done...going back for another looksie...simply lovely |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is excellent poetry and it makes me just sigh for the beauty it holds. Love, margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now this touches me |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautifully written TD. Enjoyed. Hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I am truely thankful for gods creation and the poet that can define it so well. Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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