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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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rethinking the rethinked rehashing the rehashed going over the same old script if it's a movie then who's the star? talking it over deabting the debated all's been said once than why restate it? i heard, you heard we both heard every word.. so lets stop this fighting so we can be rest assured that we meant every word that you heard that I heard that we meant every word that we both heard friends to begin with and friends at the end as long as we both heard what we heard then I know that we meant every single word kingsangel |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
if even a pigeon would turn up his know so I would have as much sense. I don't understand this line...? I sense anger and frustration in this write of yours.... I hope you will find/seek reconciliation of sorts ... Be well Roniece |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
hmmm.... your words were there now they are gone?? RDB |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I deleted the poem and wrote another one,,,,I didn't like the first one....so I rethought, rehashed, reheard, the whole thing afterall....  kingsangel |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ok, you rewrote this!  I like it.... friends in the beginning and friends in the end right?? Sometimes Bella, friends get it wrong! Be well Roniece |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
LOL..Thank you sorry I confused you for a minute....ROFLMAO....I like this one much better.... kingsangel |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
well I did like your first one too ,,,, even if I didn't understand the pigeon line!! LOL I like your writing style Bella Be well Roniece |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you you are so sweet....take care and good night. kingsangel |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
interesting how personalities come through even with name changes |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Dark thanks for reading....oh and have you heard? kingsangel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May all the words that you hear be ones that put a smile on your heart!  Loving Light, EA  |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
thank you for reading. kingsangel |
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