Open Poetry #39 |
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When The Stars Burn Out |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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when the moon runs away and the stars burn out, when darkness leaves me lonely and my heart is full of doubt, when the rain starts to pour and the path seems to end, when I'm bare in the cold and shivering in the wind, when home seems miles away and I have no clue in which direction, I know I'll be alright because I have one reliable connection and it ain't Cingular when all have turned their backs, no rollover minutes, no lines to share, one thing I will never doubt when the moon runs away and the stars burn out God will always be there. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I don't think that your stars will ever all burn out or the moon will ever leave you. You have too much beauty inside you -- Happy Thanksgiving - A |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
This is perfect in every way you. I adore it... kingsangel |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
Now that is AWESOME (even if sad), nevertheless in its own mood light, beautiful all the same and I did mean mood light, so that was not a typo on my part my heart was touched, and is that not positive, in relation to poetry and a reason to express, by way of this art form ![]() a poet who cares |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Dixie, faith is a wonderful thing and often the unknowing makes the heart further believe, my backstop and my comfort I always find in hope and faith. A wonderful write here my friend, very much enjoyed. Rick |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
"when all have turned their backs, no rollover minutes, no lines to share, one thing I will never doubt when the moon runs away and the stars burn out God will always be there." Amen! I loved this poem Dixie! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you ladies and gentlemen ![]() I'm blushing |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent write Dixie. TD |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Yahoo, Dixie! I can hear the music! Liked this a lot! misc |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
I am awed and inspired. Wonderful poem. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
this is beautiful ! Be well Roniece |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dixie - You're right that we're never alone but wouldn't it be nice sometimes, just sometimes, if "someone" would point us in the right direction? Enjoyed the read, as usual! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dixie~So beautiful and inspirational! Yes, He will always be there. ![]() |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Amen and amen! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...unfortunate that some only have Cingular...and feel totally lost if someone doesn't call them...James |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I snapped my cell phome in half a couple of years ago I haven't had one since....but GOD is a forever presence.... kingsangel |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dixie...Yep...You always have a direct like to him, no busy signal or call waiting. Good for you dear friend...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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