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To Ask Of Lady Luna (duet with Karilea)
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To Ask Of Lady Luna (duet with Karilea) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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To shine her light across your soul and wrap you in her magical weave that you might fly high in celestial skies knowing this, the gift of flight.... She listens in on dreams of goals as winds strip trees of leaves taking with her those long lost sighs, carries them forth onto a site Where dreams exist in slips of mist and there are no tears to cry she whispers then, on stir of wind that in quiet hush your heart might know Soft, these stirrings, still, and kissed, that souls may reach new highs still I seek some absolute spirit in kin as greetings from above might glow And here in heart they still exist these loved ones held in reprise cherished so deeply from within extending above, beyond and below. {thank you, Mother Sun...  )[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-27-2006 06:15 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea and Gentle Spirit~ ~In duet this light of Luna oh so very softly done All things indeed come right between Gentle and the Sun words of beauty on display brings the soul new light this day shines bright duet now done ~ Nice ladies~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is how the gentle tender hearts see together ...it's lovely! |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Donna and Karilea, Within is weaved a soft soothing tale of gentle hearts - giving warmth to all who venture there. Thank you both for the wonderful duet! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
How lovely this is. While the responses are magic. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enchanting ladies! So gently woven are your words. Hugs to you both. Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A lovely duet by two lovely ladies ! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
"Soft, these stirrings" Gentle Spirit and Sunshine, words to describe your lovely duet! A pleasure to read! misce' |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all. To write with this Gentle Spirit, is nothing more than a blessing of heart.... |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
Ladies!! Brava. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A blessing to us all ladies. Lovely Luna write.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
amazing! |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
And here in heart they still exist these loved ones held in reprise cherished so deeply from within extending above, beyond and below. {thank you, Mother Sun... Sigi Gentle Spirit and Karilea this is a warmth found at a story fire,where ancients spirits stir ancestors fires glowing in a midnight sky awiating the tales begin and end!It is truly beautiful!
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Marvelous Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
dear ladies these lines have stolen my heart such gentle beauty I do love these stirrings |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You all bless us with your comments and I am sure I speak for Karilea when I say thank you... and MommaSun?? to write with you IS a blessing in and of itself....for this, I thank you.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You are both a blessing to write with.... So girls...sharing is allowed....and we thank you both for what you have given us. |
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