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themute
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0 posted 2006-11-20 11:04 PM


Entranced by a movement that procures
seemingly infinite thoughts.
Hands on the coffee cup as the coffee is pored.
Streaming down sweetness, as sweet as her face.
He hoped it would last because she laughed like sugar.
While he stood to twirl thin straws,
She laughed in his face.
But her laughing didn't matter
because he tasted latté.  

    


I am the two-toed wanderer

© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
Juju
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In your dreams
1 posted 2006-11-21 12:23 PM


I like this
-Juju

-Juju

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Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2006-11-21 06:14 AM


Your words alone should be enough
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displaced
3 posted 2006-11-21 09:33 AM


this kinda reminds me of sitting in Waffle House at 2am

don't know why, but thanks for the memory

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2006-11-21 03:25 PM


Matthew~

I like this thought -

'she laughed like sugar'

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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