Open Poetry #39 |
Subliminal Change |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Subliminal Change Tell me this, Of the slings and arrows sent your way What part you capture in dismay Is not the finger pointed out, The claim a victim states in doubt? Speak to me, Of times now past Your reaction, what you did last Is not the most profound to heal In recognition, what we feel…now? Talk to me of what we do, When once again, these tender few Revisit future times in you Is not the means to simply state What happened then, the best relate Identified with its effect, the very core of disrespect? Is not the truth to liberate Without control to demonstrate the new? Is not the finger pointed out, The claim a victim states in doubt, we do? Copyright Kkh 11/20/06 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Strong questions awaiting answers... You do have a way with pinning things down. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Is not the truth to liberate Without control to demonstrate the new? Is not the finger pointed out, The claim a victim states in doubt, we do? Siyo ThisDiamond a soul questions itself just so,seeking answers it already knows.Still we wonder to ourself in doubt good enough,or wanting still? Sigi for making me to remember questions are good medicine for learning!
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I am just moved by this! wow! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand title...a 'write' that presents so very, very much to think quite carefully about! "Speak to me, Of times now past'''' ....Is not the most profound to heal In recognition, what we feel...now?" The past is, of course, irrevocable...the future as yet powerless to be born....only the 'NOW' contains our only clay of infinite sparkling potentialities! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Tell me this, Of the slings and arrows sent your way What part you capture in dismay" I'm still stuck thinking about this one great work TD |
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