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The Shadow in Blue
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0 posted 2006-11-20 07:42 PM


Reality check time
look where you are at
and think where you will be
in the coming years

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2006-11-20 07:43 PM


A very reflective write Jill and very well written.  You present much to think about with such brevity.  *applause*
The Shadow in Blue
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2 posted 2006-11-20 07:49 PM


Thanks for the review GS, much appreciated. Intiatally when I wrote it I thought it was incomplete, but not so much anymore.

^_^
~J.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-11-20 08:24 PM


for sure

good advice

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