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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I am enigma the purest of fantasy the core, the center of every mans dream; I know the secrets to each woman’s desires I am cold as ice yet burn with fire. I can be completely frustrating on the verge of complication. In the same breath spoken, as gentle I too, am total domination. I am lady I am friend I say my prayers I curse like men I am afraid of none but not always strong I rage like storm I am autumn’s song I am embarrassed I am not shy I'll leave you in love left only with why's. I am both hated and loved by men I am mystery I am, woman. seek the flame within yourself |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well...WOMAN....you are right on all counts, particularly the woman part.... What would us guys do if we didn't?...never mind.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My muse seems to be leading me down a different path right now Barry....not sure where all that came from, just that it arrived so I wrote it. Thanks hon. Hugs. |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
You just summed up the quintessential conundrum of my life! Loved it! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
enigma… thou art woman absolutely perfect gentle Donna… |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a pleasure to read! |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
I am afraid of none but not always strong I rage like storm I am autumn’s song I am embarrassed I am not shy I'll leave you in love left only with why's. Oh Gentle D this is smooth and I can Feel the power in it! Love it. |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
*oops* Library  |
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Dawud New Member
since 2006-11-20
Posts 2 |
Great read. Made me smile, made me think... Women Mmmm... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
It's not difficult for me to explain nor is it a mystery that I love this piece Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, a pleasure to see your bad girl walking |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Pressie, am so glad that you enjoyed this thanks for stopping in. Kate, you make me smile and I've still got those gods and goddesses screamin at me.. I just havent been able to understand what they are trying to tell me yet  Dixie, I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and I'm happy to see you here again, it makes me smile. Amber my dear, I do thank you for that. big hugs to you gf. Dawud, it's nice to meet you, welcome to Passions. Your smile pleases me, thank you. Loper, doctor of love, of course you would understand. Thanks sweetie. Hugs. |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
I loved the continuous contradictions you used to add to the complexity and confusion known as woman. Great effect and overall sound. *thumbs up* ~J. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ladydaughter, you are the title, indeed. [and I've witnessed the functioning!] Have I told you lately how proud I am of you? |
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