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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2006-11-17 10:10 AM


bend of bow lies lithe
letting fly the arousal
shivered from quivering sides

by fire's cracking knuckles
when worn by the eyes of man
as a gown of stormed stories

the whispers under eden's brow
for the dancer of too soon sudden
when she bends rootless limbs in trees

and the drifter of souls deals her cards
face down on window's blur mirroring
double downs with single dawns

saved knightless as severed worshiping
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daark

scribblenote:  love songs for the model in   fredrick's of hollywood catalog?

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (11-17-2006 11:31 AM).]

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Decaflame
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1 posted 2006-11-17 11:24 AM



Works for me.  


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-11-17 11:26 AM


ms d, thanks for the read
The Lady
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3 posted 2006-11-17 02:34 PM



not that model again?

Stranger darlin'
I love the way you
alliterate

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-11-17 03:20 PM


ladyone, yep same model, still glued on the same alley wall too next to my skidrow living room..but I got new glasses now..(grin) thanks lady
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2006-11-17 06:55 PM


oh but I can hear you singing to her now...mmmhhmmmm  Stranger, nice, this write..
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-11-18 06:56 AM


ms gs, thanks for the read
inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2006-11-18 06:45 PM


double downs with single dawns

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i love how you work those words

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