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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I will not give in on those days, when it would be easier to give up I have been down that road before it's in the past I've shut that door and now I race to hide the key because sometimes I can still hear it calling me back to that place I refuse to go my love I have tried to give, and show but time is wearing me smooth as stone and it's time to allow myself this feel of silk upon the weathered the tattered, yes it's true that you have worn me well but my friend, time, always tells when the soul has been torn down too thin and where roads end and begin, again on some new highway in some new day. I'll try to get there with a smile on my face but I refuse to go back to that place of past. The die is cast I am but a mold of today, tomorrow and the past unwilling to be broken; shape me. seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-14-2006 07:14 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the strength in this, the self-protect thoughts that are often needed to walk through storms safely past the shadowlands. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Shadowlands.....yes Kacy, I love that. I might have to borrow that phrase some day, if'n ya don't mind hon? Thanks for understanding this one, I know you do. HUGS!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I am but a mold of today, tomorrow and the past unwilling to be broken;" You show your strength and determination in this write Donna. Well done!  Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I love this I am adding it to my library if you do not mind.....thank you, Julie kingsangel |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Yes, "I have been down that road before." I enjoyed the poem very much. Thanks for sharing! Omnia vincit amor TP |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This asks for acceptance and input... and love. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"but time is wearing me smooth as stone and it's time to allow myself this feel of silk" beautifully done gentle Donna I feel your strength here... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BRAVA! I love the strength within and between the lines! Write on! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Wow..I loved this. Well done Aunt Donna! "My soul is adrift in oceans of madness |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
I really loved this one. Powerful. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i like it donna a lot it speaks with strenght and power no more wimpy women take those powers back ladies go sister go.............  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
giving up is the easy way out, and that is just not your style...your strength echoes throughout this enlightening write. Enjoyed |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
The die is cast I am but a mold of today, tomorrow and the past unwilling to be broken; shape me. Siyi Gentle Spirit in truth though sadly beautiful it is strength that shines through,we woman are much stronger than even we know.As friend,sister,auntie,mother,grandmother we have many faces,many duties,as wife,lover,friend,companion these duties differ,in all we must demand respect the same as we give respect and allow only life itself to mold through each experience gaining wisdom,knowledge,and strength to face each new challenge! Sigi for the sharing,and many blessings for your days!
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
An inspiring write full of strength. Wonderful work. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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