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Decaflame
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0 posted 2006-11-16 09:25 AM




When around your light
Everlove becomes the mast
See white silk in flight
By the conquest of your eyes
Comes the tremble of this soul




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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-11-16 09:48 AM


see white silk flying
yet passion soars the higher
gauge it by shudder
this reciprocal conquest
mutual culmination

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2006-11-16 10:32 AM


sneaking in quick to say how lovely this is!!  
The Lady
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The Southwest
3 posted 2006-11-16 02:38 PM



ahhh
this is wonderful
Decaflame

LeeJ
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4 posted 2006-11-16 03:17 PM


upon viewing what you so masterfully describe, my eyes tear, tears of joy.

Lovely

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2006-11-16 03:58 PM


May the light of your love keep you aloft forever more!

May his fire match yours, Flaming One!

Good to read your poetry again! You weave such magic!

Loving Light,
EA

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-11-16 04:34 PM


ms d, eye do enjoy how you spin your whispers
Martie
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7 posted 2006-11-16 09:21 PM


Deca....you fly and sail at the same time in this love.  
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2006-11-16 09:52 PM


beautiful
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9 posted 2006-11-18 05:26 PM


One might say that the person is powerless
to the eyes of another...makes me think of
our friend Drac....  Well done Deca....
flame on

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