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My Love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: My Love You are to me the fairest fair The essence of my hearts ensnare Forever’s piece of magic mist Sealed by kiss that locked the gist You are the holder of my heart A wisp of kiss that was the start I know the moment of this light That burned its way through mind and sight You are the sauce the course and force The very essence of the source You are my love the meaning of The goal and soul of Eden’s love You are the other part of me That gives me wings and sets me free You are Pandora of the box That saves me from this paradox For you began and end my goal In other words you are my soul |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it is a great thing to be able to love oneself to the awareness which you possess...this was endearing, a greatness for all of us to think about. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Good heavens I missed you.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Sigh!!! Your Pandora is one fortunate Box!  ~ and must be an extraordinary soul to be deserving of such an extraordinary poem of love, respect and adoration! God bless you both!  EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel LOL See if you can get a peak at the list. You will have to look a ways back because our next anniversary will be 65 years married. My oh my how time flies. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness! Did you marry your precious Isabel when you were only a few weeks old?!? lol I want to be like you when I grow up! ~ and her!  God bless you both!  EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You have your own beauty and are beautiful now.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ BEAUTIFUL ... love looks so good on you and Isabel too~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you sweety. |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
I haven't given up on finding that "Forever’s piece of magic mist", yet. Well done! Thanks for sharing Seymour. Omnia vincit amor |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pressie Don't worry everyone has their own piece of magic mist. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy I just walked through your magic mist, and I think the love bug bit me!  Sixty Five years? You must have married in kindergarden! Love to you both~ Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx for the heads-up about magic mist and thanx for another crafty write as only you can do. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Kindergarden? not quite. LOL Barry, Thank you my friend. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
65 years i am honored to know you, you are highly respected and deeply blessed My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES, I appreciate your reply, thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
65 years of love oh Sir Sy a lifetime of smooches and snuggles for you and Isabel you are both inspirations... the poem is lovely too |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
O'siyo diganeli svigi for sharing such hope and beauty!
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wredgranny My pleasure, thank you for the sweet comment. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady There were thorns with the roses but it all worked out well. |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Love your rhyme and meter Seymour. Another great job. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When you heart is on your sleeve? I think that is when we all know who is the lucky one around here.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Steve Thank you my friend. Sunshine You are a sweetheart. |
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