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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-11-17 08:09 AM


Rewrite:


My Love

You are to me the fairest fair
The essence of my hearts ensnare
Forever’s piece of magic mist
Sealed by kiss that locked the gist

You are the holder of my heart
A wisp of kiss that was the start
I know the moment of this light
That burned its way through mind and sight

You are the sauce the course and force
The very essence of the source
You are my love the meaning of
The goal and soul of Eden’s love

You are the other part of me
That gives me wings and sets me free
You are Pandora of the box
That saves me from this paradox

For you began and end my goal
In other words you are my soul

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-11-17 08:35 AM


it is a great thing to be able to love oneself to the awareness which you possess...this was endearing, a greatness for all of us to think about.  


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-11-17 08:39 AM


LeeJ
Good heavens I missed you.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-11-17 09:06 AM


Good morning, Sir Sigh!!!

Your Pandora is one fortunate Box!
~ and must be an extraordinary soul to be deserving of such an extraordinary poem of love, respect and adoration!

God bless you both!


EA

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-11-17 09:18 AM


Earth Angel
LOL See if you can get a peak at the list.
You will have to look a ways back because our next anniversary will be 65 years married. My oh my how time flies.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2006-11-17 09:25 AM


My goodness! Did you marry your precious Isabel when you were only a few weeks old?!? lol

I want to be like you when I grow up! ~ and her!

God bless you both!



EA

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2006-11-17 09:48 AM


Earth Angel
You have your own beauty and are beautiful now.

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7 posted 2006-11-17 07:05 PM


Seymour~
BEAUTIFUL ... love looks so good on you and Isabel too~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com     

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2006-11-17 07:48 PM


Marge,
Thank you sweety.

Pressie
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9 posted 2006-11-17 07:49 PM


I haven't given up on finding that "Forever’s piece of magic mist", yet.

Well done!

Thanks for sharing Seymour.

Omnia vincit amor

TP

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2006-11-17 07:53 PM


Pressie
Don't worry everyone has their own piece of magic mist.

Enchantress
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11 posted 2006-11-17 08:17 PM


Sy I just walked through your magic mist,
and I think the love bug bit me!
Sixty Five years?  You must have married in kindergarden!
Love to you both~ Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

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12 posted 2006-11-17 08:18 PM


Thanx for the heads-up about magic mist and
thanx for another crafty write as only you
can do.

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2006-11-17 08:43 PM


Nancy,
Kindergarden? not quite. LOL

Barry,
Thank you my friend.

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14 posted 2006-11-18 06:17 PM


65 years   i am honored to know you, you are highly respected  and deeply blessed

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2006-11-18 07:26 PM


MGROVES,
I appreciate your reply, thank you.

The Lady
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16 posted 2006-11-18 08:01 PM



65 years of love
oh Sir Sy
a lifetime of smooches and snuggles
for you and Isabel
you are both inspirations...

the poem is lovely too

wredgranny
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17 posted 2006-11-18 08:12 PM



O'siyo diganeli svigi for sharing such hope and beauty!


  granny!

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2006-11-18 08:54 PM


wredgranny
My pleasure, thank you for the sweet comment.

Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2006-11-18 08:56 PM


Lady
There were thorns with the roses but it all worked out well.

sewasham
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20 posted 2006-11-18 10:22 PM


Love your rhyme and meter Seymour. Another great job. Take care and Have fun. Steve


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21 posted 2006-11-18 10:24 PM



When you heart is on your sleeve?
I think that is when we all know
who is the lucky one around here.








Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2006-11-19 08:12 AM


Steve
Thank you my friend.

Sunshine
You are a sweetheart.

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