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We Changed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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We Changed You and I, we're different now. We're opposite, like night and day. Neither one to hold at fault, I feel a bit helpless, in a way.  I go often to my secret place, a place you'd never find me, but there is where I find you and leave reality behind me. There is where I still love you and replay our greatest memories, lean my head back and sigh, as your fingers touch me in the breeze. There is where I will keep you close though we've become estranged, I won't let us fade into reality... because reality is we changed. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"There is where I still love you and replay our greatest memories, lean my head back and sigh, as your fingers touch me in the breeze." this is simply beautiful Dixie and the picture is so perfect |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You wear the change beautifully, my friend. A |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
passing shadows, That brought back a lot of memories. I know I'm not the man I used to be, and neither is she...... Well done! Omnia vincit amor |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Excellent. You Are Loved |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, this is a beautiful love poem. Even though it's sad in ways, in other ways it's not. Those sweet memories are always beautiful. Hugs, Ethel |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Dixie , this was beautiful and so touching , yes for whatever reason , changes happen , but cherished memories always remain Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm so glad you all enjoyed this bit of sad and happy together thank you for lovely comments |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Wow; is all I can say Miss Dixie. This one takes the cake, I loved it and have placed it on top of the long list of favorites I have by you!!! THANX... Much luv, Sweetberry |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well writ! I love it  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...change is good...James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I go often to my secret place, a place you'd never find me, but there is where I find you and leave reality behind me. Applauding you while shaking my head in amazement...beautiful write....bittersweet, yet certainly from the soul of love...yours! Yes, change is inevidable...but to love like this compliments us for the rest of our lives. Hugs |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Very good...this speaks so much of what I need to sit and ponder... but you have such a better way with words I'll let you do the speaking...thank you and take care..JulieAnn kingsangel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm honored by the commentsSweetberry, my friend!  I do miss you when you are gone. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It sucks too right? Sometimes time and circumstances do change us and our relationships with others, and that is why I guess it creates new ones? Here's to meaningful relationships of all kinds. NICE! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is such a beautiful melancholy in your words, dear Dixie ... that place is a healing place. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
This is beautiful and I can really relate. |
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