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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-11-14 10:37 PM


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Above green pines
The changed leaves
Of oaks and elms
A hawk is flying

The air
Under his wings
Is a sea on which he glides

Autumn for him is blue
Mixed with the colors of desire

To stay in a dream
Of how things should have been
And never come down


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-11-14 11:56 PM


Huan - you write with such beauty!  loved this work of yours

Be well
Roniece

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2 posted 2006-11-15 07:24 AM


yes indeed
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3 posted 2006-11-16 02:54 PM


Oh yes indeed.... I like this poem on every level -- being that bird myself, from time to time.

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Huan Yi
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4 posted 2006-11-16 08:19 PM


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Thanks to the Three of you . . .

Especially you Ed,
Who, being an old dog yourself,
for me is not easy to please.

John


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Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-04-20 01:14 PM


sooooo beautiful. what kind of heart can pump out those feelings!!!

simply beautiful

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