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Open Poetry #39

Crispin’s Day

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2006-11-12 02:22 AM

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The intimate way
In which autumn light
Falls on form in a room
Seems to this eye
How a man
Caresses the woman
He loves

There is a softness
That knows
Though not for long
An awe in the fact
That she’s there at all

A beam being gentle
Moves through the air
Its silence in reverence
For what it feels

To touch a wonder
With flowing hair
Experience the poetry
Of a curve

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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-11-12 06:08 AM

Perfect! My favorite of yours no doubt, I can totally see and feel the emotion of this moment.

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2006-11-14 06:32 AM

enjoyed...

Be well
Roniece

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-04-20 01:16 PM

!!!!!!!!

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