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Yomi-tsu Kuni
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Over an iron bridge Under wooden eaves My father and first love Are walking She asks him Why is it taking so long And he responds As only a wise man can Patience woman . . . He is coming . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I learned on google that "Yomi-tsu Kuni" is "The Land of Darkness" where the dead dwell ... And with this knowledge your poem sounds quite impressive ... Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The layers of thought that you tend to leave are as strong now as always... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
impressive indeed |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Wow! How sad. You know what I watch to much anime. My gues on the def was exactly that lol! -Juju -Juju |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
this is beautifully written and well described... Be well Roniece |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all, I see no issue with poets creating a few myths or at least ways of looking at things of their own, especially if it makes, harming no one, those things a little easier to deal with. Thanks again. John . |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
John..."My father and first love" I just wanted to repeat those words. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
must in the same place shown in Meditation. very touching. it touchs deeply. |
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