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Dinner with Coltrane
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Dinner with Coltrane |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Dinner with Coltrane Our last evening spent together Was romantically set in blue candles, The brilliant sounds of John Coltrane And a late meal on the balcony, As the moon shined on my hopes Of you giving me this last chance… I wanted to shower you with love and words, Appealing to that part of you that still cared; But the sounds of Coltrane blew to life Those beats in your beautiful heart And I could see by your smile His hypnotizing notes touched your soul Like butterflies scattering in a yellow field Or red and orange leaves showering a playful child. Are those tears you now cry for me? Or are they a need to understand the sweet silence Heard between the sobs of his silver sax Blowing into the night, my sins and your forgiveness… Marcel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my this is so heartfelt and beautiful!! Well done poet Sir! Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
marcel A touch of illusion within the chaos. |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Very nice visual...very fluent.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think you found the ache.... well done, Sir. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wow! Wow!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Okay, now you gotta write the sequel! What was the answer? Inquiring poets want to know Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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