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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2006-11-14 12:15 PM



           Forever....ever again?!....
                (minimalism)

                  Gray skies

                  Bare Trees

         Near the broken-brick temples

               standing silently

                  modern man

               shall ‘know’ only

                the echoes....

                    echoes....

                    echoes....

               dying....

              lonely and timeless

              Recalling what was....

                  Yesterday!


© Copyright 2006 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2006-11-14 07:42 AM


Your style lends itself well to the theme here...spiritual poverty seems widespread...yet, some see.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-11-14 07:47 AM


yesterday is gone now

live for today and dream about tomorrow

makes for a much happier being

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2006-11-14 08:15 AM


secondhanddreampoet
Alas poor Yoric I knew him well.

The Lady
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-11-14 10:21 PM



love minimalist
love this poem

you read Samuel Beckett?

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2006-11-14 10:28 PM



Enjoyed this, Sir.

Thank you.


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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2006-11-15 09:04 AM


Unless he can read
I'm glad I can read and was able to read this!

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