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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2006-11-13 07:25 PM

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So now you smile across the bar
That was between us when we were young
Apart those looks that so once assured
To bring the things you wanted from the world
It would be enough if someone bought you drinks
Pretended time was kind or he was blind
Ah Frances, the chances are we’ll go home tonight
Because it was, if no longer, what I dreamed


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2006-11-14 06:03 AM

I like how you express your thoughts - I hope your dream becomes reality... enjoyed

Be well
Roniece
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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2 posted 2007-04-25 01:13 PM

nice poem of drunk. see, how you lost a girl?


beautiful poem. it is a good one, truly.
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