Open Poetry #39 |
JoJo (an indulgence) |
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
What I remember most is that big rock with steps carved into it and the moment we were climbing it. I stuck my head out of the vines hanging below my torso and looked out at you. I don't know if you saw me or not, but it looked like you were smiling at me and it was as if the whole world stopped. ~ JoJo Johnson, 11 years old my little gift girl a pair of long legs with eyes wisp of air speaking of memories as if you are old enough to have them only a moment ago you held my finger spoke your first babbleword sang way down yonder on the Indian nation rode my pony on the reservation laughing bouncing on my knee no notion of what it meant but you sure could belt it and now you tell me the whole world stopped on the side of a rock young memory serves you well my golden girl I felt it too yes the whole world stopped when I smiled at you _______________________ JoJo is my granddaughter and a young poet her depth of soul delights me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
she is gorgeous and the poem is beautiful |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Dixie |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
a beauty just like her grand ma and the poem? i bet even your grocery list is amazing i am such a fan of yours your words sing to me thank you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Helen you make me smile thank you... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Lady, It's good to know that poetry runs not only in your veins, but will continue on and on. Love your poetry. misc |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much misc I have great hope for this little heartsong |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, she has a great teacher can see you in her eyes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhKate~ She is precious and your poetic voice brings that smile right into my heart~ Aren't we grandmothers just the luckiest people in the whole wide universe? Yep, we are~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Love and time interlace and I can't believe that face. I feel the same. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
She is open to the world because her grandmother saw the need of the world... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my she is lovely. And this poem~priceless. I too love being a grandma! Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lady Kate, it is apparent that the petal fell close to the rose. You both have such lovely, poetic souls. Like yourself, she is a very old soul and can offer much beauty to this world. God bless you both! Loving Light, Linda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Stranger she’s a born lady and a rascal too Marge grandchildren are among life’s sweetest gifts and we are so blessed to have them thank you (and for your help too, as always) how lovely Sir Sy they do interlace thank you thank you so much Decaflame thank you Nancy seems a moment ago she was my baby brighteyes like your sweet Jessica thank you for your kind words and your blessing Linda Angel |
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