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november sunday morning (inspired by Tina)
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november sunday morning (inspired by Tina) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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november sunday morning aunt bea’s breakfast table in my little girl slip bare feet swinging to the taste of muscadine jelly on hot biscuit goosebumps crawling my arms uncle lyman pours black coffee in saucer blows slips it to my mouth when she's not looking hand each side my head she pulls my hair back looks like you slept with the chickens last night girl what we gonna do with this mess? november sunday morning no sun to speak of I feel warm wrapped in the sound of the chuch choir singing on jordan’s stormy banks I stand and cast a wishful eye two hours in the future ___________ Tina took me home or as we say in the south "carried me home" with her catfish this morning /pip/Forum96/HTML/001976.html |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady This was a delight to read.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Sir Sy  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...you bring life to life!  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much for your kind words Martie  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you take every day breath and make it beautiful |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Helen thank you |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Aww, this is wonderful -- now you both have me thinking of Sunday mornings I have known. Alison |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
nice thoughts I hope aziza memories are great places to visit |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I bet you two could do an awesome duet! lovely write Kate |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done, Kate Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
This is so sweet. My granny poured her coffee into a saucer & sipped it. And how I had forgotten sitting at the table in my white cotton slip. Thanks so much for this. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you kindly Dixie thank you so much ‘Loper thank you Tina you stir my sweet southern memories make my fingers itch to write them |
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