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0 posted 2006-11-12 09:33 PM



On Tracing

What is left, then, when withered-blue tendrils
still cling, but roots are gone, cold and buried,
after once when we were
genetically inclined when all
was warm, but now,
now that all is November      remembered,
what is left             in print and time?

Memories are riling, storming under
some cloud’s vindictive, pounding rain,
while once before thundering skies left
you and me to find our own hands
in some space without room,
moving in pant o’ mine, taking up
a piece of parchment,
lead pencil, and je ne sais quoi….

we went to the window, you, and I,
placing thin skinned paper toward the
glazed glass of rain-pelted hoary glow
then eyed one another for whose hand
should be traced, around each finger, up
down, carving, curving around
scars and nails deep into the length
of grasp, to have and to hold,
from this day forward, a way
to live forever, and if we had found a way
to carve in the veins, we could have,
should have.

You won.

So did I.


© Copyright 2006 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-11-12 09:37 PM


Excellente....and I think you threw a little
bit of french at this southern boy...Good
evening Sun...

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2 posted 2006-11-12 10:13 PM


You carve deep in this one, dear sissie.  
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3 posted 2006-11-13 10:08 AM


Tis belongs on top!

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4 posted 2006-11-13 04:19 PM



cold and so
lovely Karilea...

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