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There is a World
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There is a World |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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There is a World There a world Twix night and day Where children’s hearts go off to play It is a phantoms Isle of goal Another world where lives the soul Like zeros of computers path It’s here where ones the base of math Its one that stays within the core It’s only this and nothing more Its here my mind can hear the fife Its here I see the dance of life Where beats the drums every season And the logic of a reason But life consists of night and day Where children grow and live and play But one and one that stays your core Will stay with you forever more So never lose your phantoms Isle We’re only here a little while |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ And in my 'little whiles' ... I shall have been blessed to know the poetry of your soul~ For that ... I am eternally grateful~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Again, for me....the following is like an entire poem ‘writ’ in one line! [like the grand H. D. Thoreau could do!]: “It is a phantoms Isle of goal” And, I love the entire couplet: “It is a phantoms Isle of goal Another world where lives the soul” OR: “Its here my mind can hear the fife Its here I see the dance of life” god that’s good!...readin’ this poem... what a way to start my morning! [grand ‘cheer’ for this sad and darklin’ rainy day!....wish I had here instead....a frozen ‘river of dreams’ to skate away on to Seymour’s ‘World’ !!] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just popping in before my lunch to say... Another wonderful post Sy! Have a restful Sunday. Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Seymour, my friend, I am so glad you were in my world. For you have always been a delightful one. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick It's you that are the delight to me.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge As Jacky uswed to say, "you're the greatest." secondhanddreampoet Can't tell you how much I enjoy your comments. Nancy, Thank you dear. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great to read this! I always enjoy you Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
there is something so light about your poetry Sir Sy makes my heart bounce |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I shall do my best not to ... Thanx Sy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Your reply makes my heart bounce. Barry I know you won't. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Sigh! "There a world Twix night and day Where children’s hearts go off to play It is a phantoms Isle of goal Another world where lives the soul" ~ I could read those lines over and over again! They sing to my soul! ~ and to that of my inner child!  You, Dear Poet, will never grow old! The mirror (and your joints!) may say otherwise, but you and I both know that your spirit will be forever young!  EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel How sweet that reads. |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Another nicely written piece of work. Well done. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Your poetry makes me smile every time.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Steve, Thank you for the drop by and comment. |
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