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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-11-11 03:44 AM


I am so angry
and I promised not to cry
I slam words in to this little box
bordered in light blue
I know you are slipping away
More each day

I am so angry
I promised not to cry

But, God, I will miss you so
And all I can do is write poems
and try not to cry!

Alison

© Copyright 2006 Alison - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-11-11 05:09 AM


oh I feel your pain in these words...

Be well
Roniece

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-11-11 07:18 AM


some promises can't be kept sometimes
HopeS
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3 posted 2006-11-11 08:17 AM


I can relate so much , all I can do is write poems and try not to cry

Hugs Hope

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-11-12 09:21 AM


ms az, sometimes this is the only place we can find peace..well penned ms
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2006-11-12 12:51 PM


Roniece, passing shadows, Hope and Dark --

Thank you for wiping away my tears with your words.

aziza

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-11-12 04:16 PM




aziza
it hurts me to see you cry
I feel your anger
sometimes tears
are all we have

I'm holding you
in my heart

Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2006-11-12 04:38 PM



sewasham
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8 posted 2006-11-13 11:02 PM


You put a lot of emotion into this. Sorry you're in such pain. Take care and Have fun. Steve


aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
9 posted 2006-11-13 11:09 PM


You all are the best of the best.
Hugs and kisses,
me

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