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Notes of Fire
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Notes of Fire |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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 . . . . heated touch of keys ignite the flames of passion melting hearts' ice chord dizzy dance of flicker notes ivory incinerates . . . . . Chris Barker November 2006 ~*~*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Chris..a most excellent Tanka! Very well done. Miss and love ya, Teed  Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou dear sister of mine! I love and miss you too. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Chris~ This is soooooooooooo cool !!! The graphic/painting (?) is stunning~ Your Tanka compliments it to a 'T'~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Marge & Hugs !! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I can hear the notes of fire Chris encore please... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, encore. Applause. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Chris!!! What an empassioned post! I wish that I could play the piano well enough to tickle the ivories with such passion and gusto! Beautifully done! Encore! Encore! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
where your fingers touch heated instantly thereon temperatures rise there can be no forbearance good intentions have melted Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Great imagery! As a pianist (and ‘incurable romantic’) I gotta’ LOVE this ‘write’!...... I especially enjoyed: the dance of those dizzy-flickerin’ notes! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
theren't any other words that could have made this better. Thanks for sharing, KA |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou all so very much !! Interloper, you are a gem. Hugs !! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow Chris, this is fantastic. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hi Sue! Thankyou for reading & commenting. Hugs! |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
You've shown a real mastery of this form. Very nice. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Steve. What a nice thing to say! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now how did I miss this? I'm glad it came back up...I guess I need to go searching the back pages more often LOL |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hugs & Thanks Dix!! |
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