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The Path
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The Path |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Path There is a start I would to find An art that touches heart and mind A rainbows priming in the sky O’er the abyss of damning why There is an easement I would see Within this fragile revelry A touch upon the stone of faith A moment for this passing wraith The sound of notes a fife of play A beat of drum to show the way A drop of flowers nectars core Only this and nothing more Perhaps to touch my lips the grail A moment out this Jonahs Whale A second’s sand to clog the spout A moment’s time to roar I’m out Forgive this efflux, cry of rote It is the reflux, of my throat |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
am I to have the honor of the first comment Sir Sy? “A drop of flowers nectars core Only this and nothing more” this is a lovely thought with which to spend an evening |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady I am in your debt. You saved me from slippimg through the cracks.  |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
I enjoy your style Seymour, great rhyme and meter. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Wow you'll never know how much you touched me with this poem or how much it still will after it sinks in. I had just asked to see my path... Incredible. I loved it. hugs, KA kingsangel |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sir Sy there is not a crack in this world you could manage to slip through now I get to  you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Steve, I'll take care but fun is something else. KA, We never know why things happen, but I thank you for the feed back. Lady Oh I've fallen through many a crack. But I love you for this reply and send you two back. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You beat the drum, Sy, and I'll march to it my friend  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper LOL I got a bad sense of rhythm, but thank you anyhow. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The rainbow will be there for you, and the grail to wet to wet your lips. For nobody deserves it more than the poet who has spent so much time touching our minds, hearts and souls. Sir Seymour, words alone will never express the joy you have brought to my home. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Some of these line couplets are virtually entire ‘poems’ in and of themselves! [I shall spend a very long time on each of them!…] some prime examples: A rainbows priming in the sky O’er the abyss of damning why There is an easement I would see Within this fragile revelry A drop of flowers nectars core Only this and nothing more When of the most apolaustic bent, I shall most assuredly seek out many more works by this fine, erudite wordsmith!... much applause! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet You flatter me no end, thank you for such a warm reply. inot2B A beautiful comment, thank you so much. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, as always, I LOVE your rhyme. It is always so perfectly done and I feel it an honor to read your work. I hope you never fall through the cracks, Sir Poet. I've been doing that a lot on here, but that's because I'm kind of scarce lately, probably? With love and hugs,   Ethel |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Just what I needed Seymour. To read your beatuiful poem. Always a delight to read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel Ehank you for the candy dear. Love you too.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Love your replies. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I sure must be slacking if I missed one from Sy...or I'm going blind because I did look! Glad this came up right in front of my face so I didn't miss it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing I knew you wouldn't miss me. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I bow before thee, Sir Sigh. How you are able to continue scribing such phenomenal poetry, is beyond me! You truly are amazing!  With love and respect, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Your comments mean more to me than winning the lottery. |
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