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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2006-11-10 09:16 AM

Do you ever wonder
when your not here
if I too, am in some somewhere, there
under the blanket of night
holding you closely in my dreams;
and have you ever caught yourself
pondering as the highway stretches itself
into some unknown horizon
if I am held in some still moment,

head tilted with face towards sky
eyes closed, catching some sweet glimpse
of yesterday rewinding through my mind
as sun flashes behind closed lids,

and did I suppress the smile
that formed on lips
or wear it then full,
sun kissed
in amber thoughts of you?

Did your arms also ache,
as mine did too
from the emptiness
of not holding you
last night
in moonlight hues
sighing whispers upon the winds
that they might carry the answers
back to you

so that you will know
that I am in some somewhere, there
with a heart beating the sounds

of I miss you, too.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-10-2006 10:10 AM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2006-11-10 09:24 AM

ms gs, your romantica is lovely, enjoyed it

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-11-10 11:17 AM

Simply beautiful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2006-11-10 02:36 PM

‘romanticism’ at its finest!!:
[for example]:

“yesterday(s).....rewinding through my mind
.....flashes behind closed lids” , etc…..

[like a grand, sparkling kaleidoscope of time and memory!]

OR:

“sun kissed in amber thoughts of you”

OR:

“sighing whispers upon the winds
that they might carry the answers
back to you”

This was one of those poems (for me at least)....that I wished could
‘go on'....and on, and on!......

LOVELY!!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-11-10 04:25 PM

a dream of a poem
gentle Donna...

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

5 posted 2006-11-18 12:52 PM

*sigh* Yet another one I love...

"My soul is adrift in oceans of madness
Repairing the rift that you have created"~ Disturbed

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2006-11-18 06:40 AM

so that you will know
that I am in some somewhere, there
with a heart beating the sounds

and the sounds in this are so vivid, so romantic...well done Donna

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2006-11-19 01:17 PM

My apologies for not being here sooner to thank you each. You are all, too kind.
My thanks, and peace!

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