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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813
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alone without words alone discarded no verbiage to shed light upon this gloom in the distance swirls of numbness summon a siren’s summon to come deeper in a word here and there along this dark passageway gently petitions the warm sound agreeable enough though knowing detachment is ravenous with allowance of proximity I open my mouth in attempted warning but no words are at my disposal eventually all expressions concise or otherwise weary and drift away silence’ purpose served once more without words I am alone * * * * this one is dedicated to my muse who had moved to never never land for far too long |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I open my mouth in attempted warning but no words are at my disposal ~*~ but I heard the sound of quill to parchment and followed her, here.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
often, I feel I don't have words with me and it does make a person feel so alone at times great write! |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
thank you sunshine, my muse had need to be followed, and where did she come but here? dixie...it is hard when no words come...this one was so drear that I worte it because it was the only words I had, but didn't post for some time, but when I was able to write again...well. here I am thank you |
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writergrl Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 73Las Vegas, Nevada |
a great tribute to our muse, something that sometimes loses its way; great piece. writergrl "You cannot stain a black coat." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The nice thing about our muses is that they pop back up... even if their timing is lousy. *S* Excellent write, my friend. But... you're never alone, you know... one have of two one and onlys can't be! *S* |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Never never land....maybe that is where mine went.....cheers! Julie kingsangel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I don't like that feeling when the words just won't come either. I think my muse took a long vacation. Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, ye be not alone anymore! Thy muse hast returned from never never land! ~ and she speaks as eloquently as ever!  'Tis wonderful to read the fruits of your combined poetic prowess once again! Lovin' hug to both you and your returning Muse! EA |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
I open my mouth in attempted warning but no words are at my disposal Siyo Luminosity,sigi for this sharing sometimes the shock of what people do to each other in cruelty makes me to feel this way. I feel a hurt so deep I can not express the feeling there are no words to answer,why? This is beautiful lesson!
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
"silence’ purpose served once more without words I am alone" Good stuff! Omnia vincit amor |
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