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JesusChristPose
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since 2005-06-21
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0 posted 2006-11-09 10:54 PM


As he lay in his bed,
the young man thought
about his life, so far…

It was a short time ago
When I was just a young child
I was running and playing
Most rambunctious and wild

Stepping out through life’s gate
There was no one behind me
The days were forever
At night I slept soundly

Along came my teen years
Was I a child or a man?
Confused and bewildered
No thought of a plan

The nights were forever
At times, I thought soundly
In front was my future
the past, close behind me

As he lay in his bed,
the old man thought
about his life, so far…

When I was a young man,
I constructed a wall
With the key to life’s answers
Thinking it could never fall

Nobody could tell me
I did not want to hear
I did not need to learn
I had nothing to fear

Then along came my wife
And she broke through that wall
We started our family
And my youth would soon fall

I remember it quite well
The celebration and cheer
I was still in my prime
But the forties were near

As he lay in his bed,
the dying man thought
about his wife, so near…

It never did matter
When my youth slipped away
I had her to grow old with
My soulmate 'til this day

And he spoke to her…

"We’d been together always
Or so it seemed that way
I love you more than ever
And so this I now must say ...

You were always caring
For me ... you were always there
So ... hold me for the last time ...

He takes a deep breath, sighs, and whispers...

Being with you ... I have no fear."


As he lay in his bed
The dead man was smiling

"Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself."

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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
1 posted 2006-11-09 11:29 PM


This gave me chills and nothing has done that to me in a long time. It reminds me of someone i know in part. I can't wait to read more of your stuff. Bye now. KA

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
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2 posted 2006-11-10 07:08 AM


life is short

*sigh*

very touching write, and I'm glad to see you here

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