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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there was nothing up my sleevless that wasn't tattoo'd on the leather needless to say nothing permanent that you needed to worry about unless my arms were around you and you brought your wet out and made the ink run somehow and didn't scrub it off soon enough then I guess I could be to blame for the small smudge on your proper perhaps now, if you just take it off and leave it off for a while we can let it soak in the dark to see if we can make it all the same on the inside as it is there at the edge of your outside places ________________ daark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Or...I could just "SHOUT" it out... (oy I crack me up) eheh  *ahem*  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms serene, I like that idea...we could be soil mates then..thanks hon |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Was going to comment on the poem, but the responses cracked me up.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms deca, thanks for coming over to this side of the sandbox |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
 'your proper' -- that one got me. I like this. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms nan, thanks so much for the touch |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
soaking sounds good to me  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks mermaid lady |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a small smudge from inked shoulders and arms that could comfort on winter days or stir a shiver when it is warm nice one Stranger darlin' |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mmmmm, nice |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, oh heck come get some on ya..thanks hon _____________ ms ps, thanks dixie woman |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Smudging is good - it blurs the lines. I like this. A [This message has been edited by aziza (11-10-2006 07:20 PM).] |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
The edge of my outside places you said. Hmmmm contemplation sets in. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, I love that word thank you for the touch _______________ ms angel, thank you for reading between the edges |
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