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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-11-08 07:17 AM

there was nothing up my sleevless
that wasn't tattoo'd on the leather
needless to say nothing permanent

that you needed to worry about

unless my arms were around you
and you brought your wet out
and made the ink run somehow

and didn't scrub it off soon enough

then I guess I could be to blame
for the small smudge on your proper
perhaps now, if you just take it off

and leave it off for a while

we can let it soak in the dark
to see if we can make it all the same
on the inside as it is there

at the edge of your outside places
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daark

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2006-11-08 09:28 AM

Or...I could just "SHOUT" it out...

(oy I crack me up)

eheh

*ahem*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2006-11-08 09:32 AM

ms serene, I like that idea...we could be soil mates then..thanks hon

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

3 posted 2006-11-08 10:12 AM

Was going to comment on the poem,
but the responses cracked me up.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2006-11-08 10:33 AM

ms deca, thanks for coming over to this side of the sandbox

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2006-11-08 12:58 PM

'your proper' -- that one got me. I like this.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2006-11-08 01:44 PM

ms nan, thanks so much for the touch

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2006-11-08 02:22 PM

soaking sounds good to me

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2006-11-08 03:10 PM

ms gs, thanks mermaid lady

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2006-11-08 09:40 PM

a small smudge from
inked shoulders
and arms that could comfort
on winter days
or stir a shiver when it is warm

nice one Stranger darlin'

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2006-11-08 09:44 PM

mmmmm, nice

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2006-11-09 06:51 AM

ladyone, oh heck come get some on ya..thanks hon

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ms ps, thanks dixie woman

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

12 posted 2006-11-10 01:51 AM

Smudging is good - it blurs the lines. I like this.

A

[This message has been edited by aziza (11-10-2006 07:20 PM).]

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

13 posted 2006-11-10 01:57 AM

The edge of my outside places you said. Hmmmm contemplation sets in.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

14 posted 2006-11-10 07:12 AM

ms az, I love that word
thank you for the touch

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ms angel, thank you for reading between
the edges

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