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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Thanks to all those who have been reading my poems, and to all those who shared with me my 100th poem ("One Hundred Smiles"). Here we go, Stranger Hey stranger guess you are new here too seems you are bored yet you seem interested in what i'm saying want to listen my story? hey stranger maybe you can help me you have walked many roads i cant tell from your eyes my story is so complex so sad so full of betray and pain but so full of ideals and honor come closer stranger and hear well i had everything i enjoyed everything and shared with my friends everything i had time passed and happiness increased i was living my best days yet now i lost it all because of defending what was mine now i'm looking for the only thing that can save me love hey stranger i know you know what i'm talking about i can tell from your smile it was a rainy day and i was at home moments later i was defending my love from the less expected person my best friend ond finally i lost it all both the love i defended and the friend that betrayed me hey stranger i know you understand i can tell from your look i lost my yess stranger i lost her what can i do? well, stranger thanks for your time i have to keep searching i have to keep walking those roads to find my yess if you ever see her, stranger tell her to stay there tell her that i'm still looking for her tell her that i've told you my story tell her that i already forgave her so that she will know that her mistake is no longer a secret see you again, stranger thanks for hearing thanks for smiling haven't seen a smile a true smile in a long time 'cause i can't smile see you later and take care stranger |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hey stranger I FELT this one, deep inside and am sorry for your pain, but not sorry you left it at our footsteps in such a powerful write |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
Well done, the idea is folky so I like it much. I am the two-toed wanderer |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
thanks for replying!! much appreciated! Denis. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
It takes a big heart to overcome such pain. Forgiveness is divine, they say. Well done Denis. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Herein my life was writ!....I imagine this touching work is supreme dejavu for many (most?) of us readin' it!....I was instantly teleported through the timegate back to Scotland and the moment I lost my grandest love!...and in this timeless 'magic mirror' of a poem.... I saw reflected the ghost that I've been ever since! I believe a prime reason that I can still 'write' poetry...is because I can 'read' works such as this...which speak so eloquently with the voice of the 'everyman'! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denis~ 'i had everything i enjoyed everything and shared with my friends everything i had' This is such a wistfully rewarding penning~ Sad ... but well done~ I'm sure there are those who have gone through much the same situation, but didn't have the ability to pen it so effectively~ Nicely done~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Well Thanks a lot!!..i'm really happy you liked it!!..heh, you gave my first smile..havent smiled since i woke up!.. thanks again! Denis. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I'm a stranger and faces don't come out of the rain but if I do see her i'll be sure to tell her......sweet dreams!!! Julie |
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