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sewasham
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since 2006-09-11
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Oklahoma, USA

0 posted 2006-11-07 10:09 PM


A Girl That I Once Knew

Here’s to a girl that I once knew
With silky skin and eyes of blue
And hair that had a golden shine
Whose kiss was sweet as sparkling wine

We loved to share a quiet dance
And reveled in our young romance
We thought those days would always last
But time goes by the way too fast

I saw that girl again today
The golden hair’s now flecked with gray
Those eyes still have the bluest shine
Her kiss still tastes like sparkling wine

Here’s to a girl that I once knew
And dear I’m glad that girl was you



© Copyright 2006 Stephen E. Washam - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-11-07 11:42 PM



Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-11-08 07:16 AM


If you don't have a "special" reason
to gift this to your love,
this poem alone will cause
a little celebration...

charming!

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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3 posted 2006-11-08 04:27 PM


Steve,

this is a lovely sentimental ballad however... the way it's written makes it seem like you've only met the girl again today after a long absence. It is because you are trying to say you see her with fresh eyes everyday or is it something else?

Cheers
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



sewasham
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since 2006-09-11
Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA
4 posted 2006-11-08 11:26 PM


Thanks for commenting Keth. Actually I wrote this after looking through an old yearbook and seeing my wife's photo and about that time she walked into the room and it just clicked. Take care and Have fun. Steve


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