Open Poetry #39 |
REJECTED BY TIME |
shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
REJECTED BY TIME I have been rejected by every moment I have lived; every moment I have loved has left me. and now I ride the one-winged bird of memory; though at best it can only turn the fall into a spiral. PLEASE VISIT MY WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Very cool. I enjoyed this one very much. "Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I picture this in my mind bittersweet write |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
very powerful write. to think memory as a one winged bird spiraling from miles in the air is amazing to me. thank you for sharing, -John nice use of muffin |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
I love reading you, though there are moments I just do not know how to reply, for there are so many words and to put them in a uniform structure is daunting. So I keep the unformed sentences to myself. Then again, there are your works that leave only one word left to describe. Wonderful. And this is exactly just that. Sandra |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautiful write Anthony - I hope you don't spiral though Be well Roniece |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Most excellent Tony!! Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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