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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you made a playdough man out of the boy of me without even moving your hands just your eyes I guess already knew how to knead the need to peel the tree of me down from some daydreamer sky and I saw your mouth too saying those things almost but smiling instead leaving all of that also only to my imagination and then you laughed abruptly as if you already knew I was thinking that going there only in my mind wasn't near enough ______________ daark |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
We don't walk the edges of your poems often enough, either. Smiling...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms D, thank you for walking close this time |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"from some daydreamer sky and I saw your mouth too saying those things almost but smiling instead leaving all of that also only to my imagination"  nicely done D  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sea, thanks lady |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin’ something about the boy of you brings out the smile of me |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
big daddy in teddy bear mode....ya know I love it D. Suddenly? Little boy blue comes to mind.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, thanks lady friend _______________ ms gs, thank you little one |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...sometimes going there only in mind is the most intimate place to be.  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my!! loved this write of yours! Such talent you have! Be well Roniece |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thanks hon, you do smile me ______________ ms b, thanks to you for your reviews |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
....man shall not live by bread alone  I always knew there was something too adoreably captivating about that Pillsbury Doughboy! Daark in disguise?  [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (11-14-2006 12:47 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl..shhhh is a secret, thanks ms kl |
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