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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-11-13 09:27 AM


you made a playdough man
out of the boy of me
without even moving your hands

just your eyes I guess
already knew how to knead the need
to peel the tree of me down

from some daydreamer sky
and I saw your mouth too
saying those things almost

but smiling instead
leaving all of that also
only to my imagination

and then you laughed abruptly
as if you already knew
I was thinking that going there

only in my mind wasn't near enough


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daark

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Decaflame
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1 posted 2006-11-13 09:38 AM



We don't walk
the edges of your poems
often enough,
either.

Smiling...




Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-11-13 09:40 AM


ms D, thank you for walking close this time
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3 posted 2006-11-13 09:51 AM


"from some daydreamer sky
and I saw your mouth too
saying those things almost

but smiling instead
leaving all of that also
only to my imagination"




nicely done D


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-11-13 10:03 AM


ms sea, thanks lady
The Lady
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5 posted 2006-11-13 04:53 PM



Stranger darlin’
something about
the boy of you
brings out the smile of me  

  

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2006-11-13 05:16 PM


big daddy in teddy bear mode....ya know I love it D.  Suddenly? Little boy blue comes to mind.  
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2006-11-13 06:57 PM


ladyone, thanks lady friend

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ms gs, thank you little one

Martie
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8 posted 2006-11-13 10:55 PM


DS...sometimes going there only in mind is the most intimate place to be.  
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2006-11-14 05:09 AM


oh my!! loved this write of yours! Such talent you have!

Be well
Roniece

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2006-11-14 06:58 AM


ms martie, thanks hon, you do smile me


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ms b, thanks to you for your reviews

Klassy Lassy
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11 posted 2006-11-14 08:08 AM


....man shall not live by bread alone    

I always knew there was something too adoreably captivating about that Pillsbury Doughboy!  Daark in disguise?  

[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (11-14-2006 12:47 PM).]

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2006-11-14 09:26 AM


ms kl..shhhh is a secret, thanks ms kl
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