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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Parts of grey Glistering wise crown Read of line codes, thoughts and thoughts. Laden sack of frowns Downward spirals Sighs of hows hows? Bowed shoulder, carved by slat and weight. Mama Mama, help me plaid. Twist and turns, of road and lanes. Can't see a vision lest yester's vague. What's tomorrow? whys and wheres? Hunched to search signs on grounds. Fixated view, down down. Guess where, where that might be? Beyond the subterranean, bound bound. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FNG~ 'Bowed shoulder, carved by slat and weight. Mama Mama, help me plaid. Twist and turns, of road and lanes.' I can see her through your vivid word portrayal~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can see her too... beautiful |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Thank you both for passing through  |
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