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Open Poetry #39

Childhood On Ice

gypsyheartx
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since 2006-02-09

Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland

0 posted 2006-11-06 12:33 PM

Hold me like wine;
Tangle me in unbridled waves of auburn hair
And caress the protruding angst,
That burns away my truths
And scars what is left of effervescent mind.
Dream of people pretend
And remember their names
So when face meets earth
And hands meet fallow flesh
You can realize fates untold, and memories sold,
For such is the story of a child forgotten.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-11-06 09:51 AM

I love your brevity, but still having so much said within it

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2006-11-06 10:13 AM

gypsyheartx,
Enjoyed the aread.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2006-11-06 10:18 AM

Very nicely done gypsyheartx - enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

gypsyheartx
Member

since 2006-02-09

Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland

4 posted 2006-11-06 08:38 PM

passing shadows- thank you, vast meaning can come from a single word, so i like to keep things short

Seymour Tabin- Thank you very much, glad you liked.

Nightshade- Thank you as well, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

~Hugs~
Gypsy

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