Open Poetry #39 |
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The Wet |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
The Wet The rain comes down and wets my mind My sane is blurred I’m semi blind I try to place a circumvent But cannot stop what God has sent Horizons stay a misty Moore And tantalize my visions poor Showing phantoms in the light Those fantasies of semi white Where dragons and angels fly Where ego makes the psyche sigh Where magic tips the scale a bit And fireflies will wink in wit I love the vision of the rain It lends a paddle to my brain It opens up a state of core Dimensions of another door And in this moments time of brief I rapture in sublime relief |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! You are a joy to wake up to these dark mornings. Come dance with me in the puddles. ![]() ![]() No spring, nor summer beauty |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, It would be my pleasure to dance with you. ![]() |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
As usual, Sy, well done! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yes, I could go for a little dancing myself! What an inspirational poem! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper Thank you for the read and comment. Passing I'll put you on my card too. ![]() |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
What a pleasure it is to wake up to a beautiful poem from our dear Seymour. It is a freat way to start my day. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick I do so enjoy your comments. ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I've taken off my shoesies for a poetic puddle-jump with you~ ![]() *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, The pleasure is all mine. ![]() |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sir Sy if you still have your shoes off take me for a spin too? I just adore the rain and you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady My shoes are off and you are in. :queeze: |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Rain, rain come and stay Let them splash the day away With mud squishing through the toes Where it ends, no one knows Enjoyed! Rae |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rae, Thank you for the interesting reply. |
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