Open Poetry #39 |
Rhyme In Time |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Rhyme she said and in my head I thought, I could do this, I can try and then my mind began to fly. What is it that I should write about; of pain, love, fear, or doubt or should I write a happy tune of lovers holding hands under twilight moon. So many choices! What should I write? Of light, of day, or dark and night, of moments held in passions sigh perhaps of broken wings learning to fly? Or of crying, lying, and losing trust; of caring, hurting, animalistic lust? Write, I will, while trying to rhyme. Forget the meter! I haven't the time! Asked she did, so I will in hopes that I'll be able to fulfill the expectations of her request and I'll do my very best to make it rhyme to beat in time right down to the very last line, just so that I can see her smile from here, to there, across the miles where night is day, and day is night it is for you my friend, that I now write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"just so that I can see her smile from here, to there, across the miles where night is day, and day is night it is for you my friend, that I now write" I know she's smiling I certainly am... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfect Donna! I'm smiling and I'll bet 'she's' smiling too. Hugs YOU! Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I love this. You surely have no shortage of muse. Rae |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Hey, you're on a roll! I wish more would rhyme some of the time and not be so droll. |
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