Open Poetry #39 |
she dances and spins |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
she dances and spins writhes within a circle of love everlasting he watches not palms upward supplicating invoking begging he listens not |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, I bet she is beautiful anyway |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
He doesn't dare... Entrapment's delight... Well done, Kacy! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
How sad. But, they never seem to pay attention. Do they? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done, indeed! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (11-03-2006 11:11 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Most assuredly, his loss! She's a delightful, whimsical sprite of a spirit! A stirring write and one that many women could identify with at one time or another in their life! Men should listen and learn! Loving Light, Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanks for reading Sunshine |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Short but says a lot Kacy, thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Men are like this, yes. But if you stopped dancing he would suddenly ask you to go on ... in his bones he is grateful. Very captivating write, dear Kacy. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks for reading and replying! M, naw...I am not going to dance to his tune. |
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